The room went pitch dark, I just lighted the candle. The sparkle in her eyes almost made the moment for me. Her brownish eyes were so pleasing to look at.
“Honey let your tongue taste it…”
She just Licks a drop of it and looks back with amusement…
“Cariño !! You suck in making Spanish sopas.”
P.S: This post is dedicated to those who thought i’d never be able to match up to this 55 word fiction challenge. Its 55 words precisely 
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Bravo.. usted lo ha hecho
Gracias
mujhe samajh hi nahi aaya, kya ho raha tha wahan pe…..wo ladki hi thi na pakka?
Yeah it takes time to understand especially when the author switched from 1900+ words into 55 words fiction
Its a Lady !! and i have see her
you suck!
I guess i suck in description especially when its 55 words
.. should be more descriptive the next time i post one of the usual sizes 
gud one! hope ur dream date vl go much better than this!
Gracias… Gracias
I’m sure it would be better cause i’m not gonna be cooking
looks like i m the only one left!
It came to me as a challenge that i won’t be able to do it and hence i took it or else even i’d be reluctant about taking it too …
Had you not ventured to light the candle, she’d probably have offered a more favourable opinion of your ..er…sopas
Cheers!
Decent DeeeCent Public public
Alas a micro mini post frm u…!!
ha ha…
Romba dhanx for dropping by
what? whacky can write even ‘lilliputian’ posts too?? gud work!
Versatile me
Every1 caught the 55 fever!
Wish I had ur versatility too.
Versatility comes only when you practise it.
People said i won’t be able to write it, but i did try it once..